White Paper 3 - suggested adjusted flow
Having read the paper in its entirety for first time, I would make the following proposed adjustments to the flow to help the reader get the information they need in the order they need it. I would suggest initiating this as a thread to gather any inputs or counter-proposals then make a proposal for voting at 10am tomorrow.
Suggested adjustments to the flow:
Propose dividing current "vision statement" part into two parts (vision statement and "UNicoins contribution the broader UN landscape" to include the parts on UN reform, SDGs, future of work etc and moving the latter part to later after the why of UNicoins and background has been provided).
Propose changing where the boxes appear so that they match the content
Adjusted order & subheads following the contents page (with "NEW" indicating moves) would therefore be:
NEW: put short form of "incentivising cross-UN collaboration" (suggest changing title to "the need for new ways to value cross-UN collaboration) to clarify the why of UNicoins early on
How UNicoins came about (formerly "background")
NEW: UNicoins' contribution to the broader UN landscape (new sub-section using content previously in vision statement)
NEW: propose moving "harnessing data insights" box to this section rather than in background where it was previously
UNicoins in practice - proposed approaches
NEW: move Why Blockchain box to the end of this section (currently after the manager-led sub-section)
NEW: change subhead "Concluding remarks" to "Conclusions and next steps"