
David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:51AM
p. 38: If we’re used to do our decisions--should be "doing" or "if we used to"

David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:51AM
p.38: snapping at you.
Mot importantly,

David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:53AM
p. 38: now: has the original--needs an additional space after the colon

David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:54AM
p. 38: adopt a new thing, build a habit, it’s a difficult -- I think it needs to be "is a difficult", grammatically
David Baldwin · Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:49AM
I think whizzbang is meant to be hyphenated. One or two z's, but two parts.