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Thu 25 May 2017 4:32PM

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Poll Created Thu 25 May 2017 4:32PM

Lets shape together the world we have in our hearts! Closed Thu 28 May 2020 4:01PM

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ale fernandez Fri 26 May 2017 8:40PM

This is incorrect grammar. I'm not an english language teacher but "together" afaik should go at the beginning or end of the sentence: Together let's shape the world we have in our hearts or Let's shape the world we have in our hearts together. Or even ust remove the together because it's kind of obvious that you won't shape conflicting worlds.

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ale fernandez Fri 26 May 2017 8:43PM

maybe "let's get together and shape the world we have in our hearts" which begs the question: why is our icon a safe? -- because the text is more reminiscent of someone with a world-heart.. A planet earth instead of a heart?

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Pedro Sun 28 May 2017 3:32PM

Mi propuesta es:
"Creemos juntos el mundo que nos hara libres"